this cartoon is great. Page one is perfect. I especially like the cast shadow on the last panel. Page two is great too, I love the way you did Justin. Awesome stuff. The last panel is a little wierd though. It took me 3 or 4 read through's to realize what was going on between there and the next page.
Overall this is a great story, it really takes you places and moves along AND it's funny. I give it 3 and a half thumbs up.
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this cartoon is great. Page one is perfect. I especially like the cast shadow on the last panel. Page two is great too, I love the way you did Justin. Awesome stuff. The last panel is a little wierd though. It took me 3 or 4 read through's to realize what was going on between there and the next page.
Overall this is a great story, it really takes you places and moves along AND it's funny. I give it 3 and a half thumbs up.
I love how you developed Justin's personality with just three key panels.
Justin's personality is nothing byt three panels. Boobs, girls, more boobs.
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